This one’s dark! Sometimes I’m not sure I like what’s lurking in my imagination. I feel I owe the nice man digging his garden in this photo an apology. But here goes…

Photo by Connie Gayer
Mr Johnson next door sure loves his garden. Out there all weathers, planting, weeding. It’s his only time to himself, his wife being so ill.
“What you doing today there Mr Johnson?”
“uh… no… nothing. Just new drainage.”
“Mrs Johnson any better?”
The shovel slips from his grasp. Eyes down, his hands flounder in the muddy puddle to retrieve it. He’s shaking.
“I brought her this” I venture “she likes chocolate doesn’t she?”
He leans hard on the shovel, pressed into the wet earth. Slowly he meets my eyes.
“Mrs Johnson’s… gone away for a little while sonny.”
98 words
Written for Rochelle Wisoff Fields’ Friday Fictioneers Challenge. Follow the link to read everyone else’s (more uplifting) tales!
I think you did the photo justice. He’s not getting any garden going. Lol. This is a great write-up, Kirsty.
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Ah thanks! Do you ever do Friday Fictioneers trE? Not sure if I’ve seen you on there.
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Actually, I don’t. I love reading you guys, though. You’re most welcome!
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Nicely written
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Thank you Neil
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Dear Kirst,
Drainage AND fertilizer I’d say.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Indeed. Thanks Rochelle!
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Methinks, in all fairness, the missus succumbed to her illness and he is saving a few bucks… 😉
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Let’s give him the benefit of the doubt, he’s just a cheapskate not a murderer! 😃
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Exactly… what I chose to do anyway 😉
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Ahhh, you got the dark twist perfectly…exact opposite of mine! Well done…
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thank you Donna!
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Could be a bit more than a little while. Could be forever.
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That’s what I was thinking!
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He could just be doing a bit of gardening while he comes to terms with his wife’s death… nah, he’s killed and buried her, hasn’t he 🙂
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Draw your own conclusions!
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A true flash ….. draw your own conclusions. Well crafted.
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Thank you!
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Another one bites the dust – or should that be mud? Nice one Kirst
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Thanks Keith!
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Always best to leave it to the reader’s imagination. Here at FF we always imagine the dark side first 😉
Nice one.
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Thanks – glad you liked it!
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Methinks the narrator may want to back away–and call the cops. Nicely done.
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Yeah, who knows what he might do next with that shovel?!
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I love how you describe Mr Johnson’s actions – he’s certainly guilty of something! Great story.
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Thanks!
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