Today’s challenge on Blogging101 was to take part in a new community blogging event. As it’s been a long time since I wrote any fiction, I thought I’d try my hand at this one: https://mondaysfinishthestory.wordpress.com/ , a weekly flash fiction prompt which challenges you to carry on from an opening sentence – this week’s being: “I see absolutely everything”. This is how I got on:
I see absolutely everything now. Shouldn’t have come as any surprise. The atmosphere between us has been tense and prickly since, well, it seems like forever. The shadows of dancing leaves flickered across the wall, making it seem like the whole room was moving, and the autumn sunshine reflected in her doe-like eyes as she looked at me with thinly veiled contempt.
“What’s up?” I tried to sound casual, but I could tell an explosion of some kind was building.
She screwed the cap back onto the bottle of nail polish with a violent twist, her knuckles stark white in contrast to her scarlet finger tips. Her fists clenched, and her voice was tight, as she said the words that really I should have seen coming:
“I know where it’s buried”….
WOW! This is fantastic!
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A great story with a last line that opens up so many possibilities! Nicely done. 🙂
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Thanks! I enjoyed trying out something different – might have to do more of it!
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What a brilliant take on the prompt. Very engaging indeed.
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Thanks Francesca, have enjoyed your recent posts too.
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I agree! This is fantastic! Great word smithing. Loved the story!
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Thank you! Will check out your blog too.
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Interesting! I want to know more!
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I have absolutely no idea what comes next!!
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Oooh, that’s a bit of a cliffhanger, isn’t it? Excellent writing – I could feel the atmosphere between them. Good stuff!
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Thank you!
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Good story Kirst! When a story makes you wonder what is going to happen next, it is a well written story. Thank you for finding and writing for the Mondays Finish the Story challenge. Be well… ^..^
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Thanks! I enjoyed writing it, will try and take part again 🙂
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I am glad you had fun! Stay tuned for some great sparks to the imagination! 😀
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I will! But might miss a week as I’m going on holiday to a world with no internet!
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Excellent!!! Love the ending…. very impactful!!!
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