Twittering Tales #26

 

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By sunset I’d reached the border. The traffic thinned as the road climbed towards the mountains. On the other side, a new life was waiting.

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Written for Kat’s Twittering Tales weekly challenge to come up with a tweet-sized story in response to the photo prompt.

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5 thoughts on “Twittering Tales #26

    • So, instead of “By sunset I’d reached the border. The traffic thinned as the road climbed towards the mountains. On the other side, a new life was waiting.” you’re thinking “The traffic thinned as the road climbed towards the mountains. By sunset I’d reached the border.” – is that right? I think you’re right, that’s actually better!

      • I find it fascinating how two well written sentences can become better without changing a word — just by reversing the order. I’ve noticed it in my own work.

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